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This was one of the darker novels I've read in a while and, for that, I really enjoyed it. Tess, Cam and Adonis present a fairly intense love triangle. Tess has loved Cam for years but he sees her as his best friend. Adonis, Cam's friend, and Tess hate each other. By the time Cam sees Tess as more than a friend, Adonis and Tess start to build some chemistry. I loved the dynamic and concept. The intensity between Adonis and Tess is WHOA hot.

This is a two star story mostly because of the extremely amateur style in the sense that there are a ton of typos and grammatical errors that really detract from the story ("a chance steal a hickey" was one of my favorites.) There are plenty of instances of completely missing words, like that example I just listed. Grammar issues, punctuations issues, etc. I just can't stand paying for a book and it has typos. I don't understand how a book can be published without it being edited first.

There are issues with continuity and the lapse of time in the novel. Minor spoiler: Like it's clear that Tess, the heroine, has NOT slept with Cam because she says and thinks as much and obstacles prevent their intimacy. However, time passes without these obstacles and it's just dropped. So did they or didn't they? That's why it's not clear if there is cheating in this novel. It's implied that they did not sleep together, but what the heck prevented them from doing so? There is a part in which Tess clearly is attracted to Cam and is ready to go to bed with him. So what happened?

There are plot holes left and right, or just half finished or unfinished concepts. Like Tess and her money struggles.. or her issues with her family... her jobs? There are hanging plot lines - like the college background itself that doesn't seem like an actual part of the character's lives except as a basic setting and a pop into class once or twice. There are one dimensions to characters that aren't forgivable... one moment a character is loving and kind, then next they are sinister. Characters change their mind about a person or situation without explanation.

A big plot hole that bothers me is that Adonis really, really hates Tess. I was expecting a moment when he may have noticed her as something more. His internal dialogue when it comes to her is extremely hateful. He considers her a cobra, a money grabber, a weed, a man tricker, a blood-sucking parasite, a peacock with a stick wedged up her ***, she's repellant, etc. I guess their chemistry overrode all of that? Why does he never think back to that? For such EXTREME hate, he switches to lust/love really quick without a second's hesitation.

Despite all of those issues - this is a page turning, weird, dark book. If I were reading it for free on Reddit, for example, I might forgive all of the above because it's actually an addicting read with plenty of content, friendships, substance... It's like a story in raw draft form. But being sold on Amazon as a novel? Meh. Get this book edited and flushed out! It's really something special.

If you love dark, noir romance, alpha male, second chance love, love triangles, angst... this one is for you. I do recommend this as a great read. It could just use some TLC.


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Tangled edition by Em Wolf Literature Fiction eBooks Reviews

I really hate giving a star rating. There is no guidelines for rating something. So I go by a 1- dreadful 2-it wasn’t terrible 3 - good/okay 4- great 5 - perfect wouldn’t change a singe thing.

Anyway now that I’ve justified myself. This book is a 3.5. It’s a decent book. Good story line. I hated the random POVs. It just jumped around and took me out of the book every time. Especially when it was a random character and not the mains. Adonis was surprisingly likable. I liked his struggle and his growth. I didn’t feel that Tess really grew in the story. Although I guess not every story has to be about growth. Anyway worth the read. I don’t regret purchasing it.
Because of a few of the reviews I read I didn't want to like this book but something kept drawing me back to it and I'm so glad it did!

First, I must say that I didn't use any names or purposely describe any scenes in the book for this review because this book is just too good to dissect. It's well written with well developed characters. The depiction of college life and circumstances is spot on.

One reviewer commented on the fact that you would need a dictionary to read the book. Well, thank goodness that kindle has a dictionary built in, but to me the use of "big words" didn't detract from the story, only made it richer. Besides, I love increasing my vocabulary.

One reviewer said that there was no cheating. In my opinion, that is semantics. If you really dissect it then maybe it wasn't, but it was really close and this made me almost dislike the heroine...almost. She initially presented herself as weak. She buried the person she was in order to become someone she really wasn't just to fit in. In the end she redeemed herself in a big way.

As for the hero of the story (the first one), he really did have a goody-two-shoes complex. It's okay to be a good guy and friend, one to which others turn, but the reason behind it is what matters. His reasons were not altruistic at all although this is what you think before getting a glimpse into his mind. And because of his mindset he created the angst that fueled the story because he only wanted the heroine once she's stopped pining for him and moved on. Read the book, you'll see!

I hope this is just the beginning of a series. I would love to know how the hero's life turns out. As a matter of fact, I'm going to search with the hopes that the second book has dropped, if there is one. If there isn't another in this series then I'll read anything I find by this author!!
This was one of the darker novels I've read in a while and, for that, I really enjoyed it. Tess, Cam and Adonis present a fairly intense love triangle. Tess has loved Cam for years but he sees her as his best friend. Adonis, Cam's friend, and Tess hate each other. By the time Cam sees Tess as more than a friend, Adonis and Tess start to build some chemistry. I loved the dynamic and concept. The intensity between Adonis and Tess is WHOA hot.

This is a two star story mostly because of the extremely amateur style in the sense that there are a ton of typos and grammatical errors that really detract from the story ("a chance steal a hickey" was one of my favorites.) There are plenty of instances of completely missing words, like that example I just listed. Grammar issues, punctuations issues, etc. I just can't stand paying for a book and it has typos. I don't understand how a book can be published without it being edited first.

There are issues with continuity and the lapse of time in the novel. Minor spoiler Like it's clear that Tess, the heroine, has NOT slept with Cam because she says and thinks as much and obstacles prevent their intimacy. However, time passes without these obstacles and it's just dropped. So did they or didn't they? That's why it's not clear if there is cheating in this novel. It's implied that they did not sleep together, but what the heck prevented them from doing so? There is a part in which Tess clearly is attracted to Cam and is ready to go to bed with him. So what happened?

There are plot holes left and right, or just half finished or unfinished concepts. Like Tess and her money struggles.. or her issues with her family... her jobs? There are hanging plot lines - like the college background itself that doesn't seem like an actual part of the character's lives except as a basic setting and a pop into class once or twice. There are one dimensions to characters that aren't forgivable... one moment a character is loving and kind, then next they are sinister. Characters change their mind about a person or situation without explanation.

A big plot hole that bothers me is that Adonis really, really hates Tess. I was expecting a moment when he may have noticed her as something more. His internal dialogue when it comes to her is extremely hateful. He considers her a cobra, a money grabber, a weed, a man tricker, a blood-sucking parasite, a peacock with a stick wedged up her ***, she's repellant, etc. I guess their chemistry overrode all of that? Why does he never think back to that? For such EXTREME hate, he switches to lust/love really quick without a second's hesitation.

Despite all of those issues - this is a page turning, weird, dark book. If I were reading it for free on Reddit, for example, I might forgive all of the above because it's actually an addicting read with plenty of content, friendships, substance... It's like a story in raw draft form. But being sold on as a novel? Meh. Get this book edited and flushed out! It's really something special.

If you love dark, noir romance, alpha male, second chance love, love triangles, angst... this one is for you. I do recommend this as a great read. It could just use some TLC.